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Post by warriorcats123 on Feb 1, 2011 9:19:22 GMT -7
"I'm going to make you wish you were never born."
The Basics
Name:Luna Kendall Nicknames/Aliases:Luna Age: 15 Grade:10 (Sophomore) Occupation: Student Sexuality: heterosexual Olympian/Monster/Titan Parent: Apollo Mortal Relatives: Sarah Kendall
Physical Statistics
Height:5'4" Weight:110 pounds Hair Color:Dark Brown Eye Color:Brown
Lets Get More Personal
Likes:- Luna is a combat type of person,but she doesn't mind flying and riding chariots.She also likes horses and makeup.Luna loves astronomy.She also loves reading about the Greek gods and goddesses.She likes to help people,especially when they're wounded.She likes being in the sun.She also likes to swim.
Dislikes: - Luna doesn't really like spiders and bugs.Especially huge bugs.
- She hates friends who betray her.Believe me,she's had plenty of practice with that before.Luna is one of those people who believes that friends should be on the good side.She also doesn't like friends that use you.She's had practice with that,too.
- Also,she hates people who think they're the best person on the universe,because,they're really not.
- She hates those rich,snobby people who have everything.(It's called jealousy.).
- .She hates lazy,stupid people who do nothing but watch TV all day.15 years of doing something every waking moment has led her to this.
- She hates monsters that insult her and tease her about her name.This has happened to her a lot.
- She hates show-offs and people who don't pay any attention at all in school.She believes,that,if you pay for something,at least try to put effort into it.But,don't overdo it and show off what you have learned.
- Luna also dislikes people(and monsters) who harm her friends.She is very protective of her friends.
Personality:Luna is a happy-go-lucky girl that sometime gets sad or mad.When she's mad,she shoots anything in range within her bow.Luna is a laid back kind of person,but when it comes to combat,she can make that misbehaving monster run back to its mommy.She gets embarrassed easily,especially when it comes to her name.She's good at poetry,like her father,and archery.She likes art and music.She's a crafty person.She is a good healer and she loves to dance.She gets stronger as the sun rises,and weaker as the moon rises.
Luna is a combat type of person,but she is also good at flying.She's great at riding chariots.She can focus on a target really easily when she is angry.She sometimes utters a prayer to her father when she is facing an undefeatable enemy.She is very smart.She never backs down from a fight.She is very determined and fierce.Luna believes in friends that are on the good side and reliable friends.The thing that motivates her to act like she does is the urge to defeat every Titan and monster on Earth.It's also pride.Around friends,Luna is shy and nice.She sees the world around her as utter chaos,what with all the bad monsters and Titans milling around.
History: Apollo met Sarah Kendall at an art festival.He fell in love with her immediately,and so did she.They stayed a couple for 2 years,in which Luna was born.On the day that Luna was born,Apollo told Sarah his true identity and said he had to go back to Mount Olympus.He disappeared,and hadn't been seen since.He also said to get Luna to a place called Half-Blood Academy.
People who know Luna's true identity wonder why Luna's name is Luna if her father is Apollo.The truth is,since Apollo is the god of prophecies,he foresaw Luna becoming a Hunter of Artemis,so he told Sarah Kendall to name her daughter Luna.On her 11th birthday,Apollo came to Luna in a dream and gave her a bow and arrow.When she woke up,it was on her bedstand.She went downstairs,only to find that her mother wasn't there,even though her mother's car was in the driveway.Luna went up to her room,got her bow and arrow,and walked out of her house.Almost immediately,she was attacked by a hellhound.Luna escaped the battle with barely her life,and she got out of her neighborhood.A satyr found her and took her to Half-Blood Academy.
Abilities:Is really good at archery,rhyming,healing,singing,dancing,drawing.When faced with an undefeatable monster, utters a prayer to her father.She took singing classes when she was 5,and she did archery when she was 10. Weaknesses:- Grows weaker as the moon rises.Even a light sprinkle of rain makes her tired.
- Bad music;she is a type of person who can't stand bad music,and she grows tired.
- Is not that good at swordplay.
- Is sometimes slow-witted;she dazes off a lot.
- She always uses her arrows at bad times,and that deplenishes her quiver.
- Doesn't drink caffeine because it makes her tired.
- .Even a light sprinkle of rain makes her tired.
Other Information: She has a bow and arrow given to her by her father,Apollo.
OOC Information
Web Name:warriorcats123 Contact:PM Play by:Jennifer Love Hewitt
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Post by Hades on Feb 2, 2011 1:12:34 GMT -7
Hey! Welcome to the site! ;D I don't know if this one is still WIP, but there's a character application form you have to use in making a bio for your character.
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Post by warriorcats123 on Feb 2, 2011 7:01:11 GMT -7
WIP?
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Post by Hades on Feb 2, 2011 8:04:14 GMT -7
Work In Progress.
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Post by warriorcats123 on Feb 2, 2011 8:24:54 GMT -7
No,this is done.
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Post by Hades on Feb 2, 2011 8:37:55 GMT -7
CLICK ME
This is the Character Bio form you have to fill out though. So that it will look like this Sample Bio. Just Modify it first and I'll review the contents.
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Post by warriorcats123 on Feb 2, 2011 9:09:32 GMT -7
But,don't I just have to add a picture and a motto?I'm confused.
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Post by Hades on Feb 2, 2011 9:20:12 GMT -7
Yes, that and the OOC information. Just use the code. Also, you might want to add more to her likes and dislikes and personality. I cant seem to grasp what she is like. What ticks her? What makes her happy? Can you also add a paragraph, preferably 5 sentences more, to her personality? Expound more on it. Also, I noticed that her strengths and weaknesses are all generalizations. Can you specify more on it? Put limitations and ranges on her abilities. If you're stumped, you can always check out sample bios at the Accepted Characters section. Once you're done with the application, just let me know and I'll review this again if it's good to go.
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Post by warriorcats123 on Feb 2, 2011 10:13:36 GMT -7
OK...
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Post by Persephone on Feb 3, 2011 0:21:26 GMT -7
Hello and welcome to Half Blood Academy. Thank you for your interest in the site and I have to say your bio shows a lot of promise However there are some things that I would like to point out. 1) Please post your character's bio form using the codes already set out for you. We'd like to keep all applications uniform here at the site and we'd really appreciate it if you could edit your post and put in all the codes. Hades as given you the link and the codes are found at the very bottom of that post. 2) For the Likes and Dislikes section, you can use point form. However as stated in the applications page, it has to be at least five points or more and you've only listed out three each. 3) As for Luna's personality section, you're really off to a good start length wise However the whole thing reads more like you're describing her abilities and talents rather then the personality of your character. She can't all be made up of talents right? What does Luna believe in? What motivates her to act like she does? How does he behave with friends? How does she behave with enemies? How does she see the world around her? Questions like that are helpful when planning a personality paragraph. You have something very good going on when you say: Luna is one of those people who believes that friends should be on the good side.Now something like that would be more at home in a personality paragraph. 4) Currently the strengths of your character out weighs her weakness. She is only a demi god and she will have a whole lot of weaknesses because of the mortal side of her heritage. But then gods have a lot of faults tootwist my nipples. You've listed down only two weaknesses so please add more to that. Please also explain how she got to be so good at archery, music and the like. True as a daughter of Apollo she has that innate talent but nothing comes without practice. As I've said it is a very promising bio all in all. If you do need any help though, please feel free to send me an PM and I shall be happy to assist you. If not, we look forward to accept your bio once all the changes have been made. Thank you for reading all this way
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Post by warriorcats123 on Mar 6, 2011 16:47:20 GMT -7
How about now?
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Post by Hades on Mar 9, 2011 10:33:03 GMT -7
Can you add more to her likes, dislikes and weaknesses? Give me at least 5 more of each and I will stamp this bio with approval.
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Post by warriorcats123 on Mar 9, 2011 16:59:58 GMT -7
OK.
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Post by Hades on Mar 10, 2011 1:25:17 GMT -7
Welcome to Half-Blood Academy! Don't forget to sign in at the Who's Who Thread, and make sure you get your Face ClaimOnce again, Welcome and happy Role Playing!
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